Straight razor of love.


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Click the picture above, then come back and read the story. I am toying with notion of adding music to the page, so you have something to add to the emotive underbelly of the yarn. Let me know what you think.

As far as cellars went, the cellar beneath the Winchester Hotel wasn’t a bad one. Running beneath the hotel, the cellar was equal in length and width of the establishment, the timber and stone lined walls leading to a ceiling nearly eight feet above the floor; well coopered barrels filled with beer but mostly spirits took up two thirds of the kerosene lamp lit floor, damp had yet to enter. A run down, heavily scarred twelve seat jarrah table was the focal point of, and dominated, the remainder of the space two storey’s beneath Lucifer’s Brothel.  It was currently surrounded by men varying between mean faced jockey, and seven foot, twenty five stone muscle bound behemoth. Seated at the head of the table sat Cat Lucifer; flanked to her right lounged her inseparable confidante and assistant, Antoinette O’Hare, a one legged ex-prostitute from the grim Toulouse streets of her birth.


Born of a consumptive French mother, and an Irish sometime standover-man/villain father, Antoinette had been raised on sweat and corruption and dirt and poverty; growing old young when the great war left a crater of her multigeneration inhabited flat, on a picturesque spring afternoon. Antoinette had been stealing food at the time of the bombing of her home, and returned to find firemen, dust, and little else not long after the artillery guns fell silent. From that moment on, orphaned and alone, she raised herself on wit and anger filled hatred; hatred at the life she lead, and the life left to her aged ten years and seven months. The loss of her lower right leg to a closely discharged German Mauser round when she was thirteen compounded the iron hard rage within her further. Living from the streets in fetid squalor through to the end of the war. In 1919 Antoinette fled France, and believing she was boarding a ship to America, a somewhat perplexed Antoinette docked in Fremantle, Australia, in the early months of 1920 with a stolen passport, matching identity, a Cossack short sword, and looted cash and jewelry from some of the grandest houses in France. Her short sword, and her wielding of it, soon became a thing of legend on Fremantle’s docks and places of dubious repute, quickly elevating her reputation as one to be avoided and revered at the same time. Tonight she was dressed in labourers trousers, shirt, soft cap and boots, remaining as shrewd and cunning as she had ever been. Her only fear in life was Cat Lucifer, the rivalled and unbeatable architect to Perth’s seedy and corrupt underbelly.

Cat, like Antoinette, was dressed in a similar fashion. Raised in Glasgow, she was harder than the city was known for. Whippet thin, six feet one inch short, arms and legs resembling plaited wire, with a gut like a washboard and a chest better suited as an ironing board, Cat Lucifer dominated every room and environment she entered. Her long face was not an unattractive match to her red hair and strawberries and cream complexion. However, spectacularly green eyes blazing near manic fury and a fine white scar running from her hairline, across her left eye, ending at her chin stopped all to encounter her firmly in their tracks. Oxford English Dictionaries might have written their definition of ‘psychopath’ specifically about Cat; a woman of no empathy some may initially have called ‘cruel’ until they fell upon her immense and unbendable hatred for all of humanity. It was then that they retracted the term, replacing it more accurately with ‘wicked’.


Standing, stamping her feet on the sawdust covered floor, Cat slammed her twentyeight year old scarred fist with the fury of an angered Norse god against the weathered table top.


“The slag Tilly Moncrief has stolen from me,” battering all around her with her angry Scots brogue, “what is mine an’ all, an’ I wants it back.”


“I want her brought to my feet alive and passably coherent.  Although just how alive is irrelevant. Air in her lungs and words to fill her mouth will be enough.”


Whilst the contents of the theft were unknown to all bar Antoinette, those at her subterranean table knew well enough of Lucifer’s temper and resultant fury not to ask.

“The first time she has stolen from me is the last. She’ll be holed up atop the National down in Freo., but she will be no easy catch. Bring her to me by Thursday night, or head to sea and never return, the choice is yours.” With a nod Cat finished her tirade, all the men stood or stooped as the case may have been, slowly, quietly, making for the heavy jarrah stairwell on the western wall of the cellar. None look at one another, nor did they cast a look in Cat’s direction.

Gazing at her prosthetic, ignoring Cat and her anger, “I’ve got woodworm in my leg again,” said Antoinette quietly to herself. Cat stormed away.










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10 Comments Add yours

  1. adarkprocess says:

    This is so good! Are you going to continue this story?

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    1. Yes, I wrote it a while ago whilst I was in hospital. I had suffered a head injury at the time, which greatly upset my memory, and as such, I only came across it today. Go figure. Anyway, short answer is yes. Cheers for reading and I seriously dig your blog. N.

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      1. adarkprocess says:

        Oh wow…but that’s impressive! Looking forward for more, and thanks for liking my blog 🙂

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        1. As I like reading your stuff, I’ve nominated you for the Liebster Award, which is an opportunity for bloggers to recognize and support other bloggers works. It’s a fun way of showing appreciation. I was nominated by If you choose to accept the nomination the rules are on the link to my blog:


  2. Great story!
    Don’t ever add music as something that instantly plays on the page, if that’s even possible. 🙂 I’d never be able to read your stories, since I have to wait till the family’s asleep to catch up on my blogs.

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    1. Ah, great point, certainly something I hadn’t thought of. Cheers for that! N.

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    2. Because you write cool stuff, I’ve nominated you for the Liebster Award, which is an opportunity for bloggers to recognize and support other bloggers works. It’s a fun way of showing appreciation. I was nominated by If you choose to accept the nomination the rules are on the link to my blog:


  3. S. Chersis says:

    The music was an interesting touch to this.

    I quite like Antoinette. I’d love to see more about her if that’s ever an option!


    1. Antoinette is the reason that story, a lengthy one, occurs. She does show beck up, but not in the manner shown of her so far. I will put up a bit more of her a bit later, time permitting. You are the best and I love your blog, have I told you that before? N.

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      1. S. Chersis says:

        I look forward to it!

        And you’re too kind–I quite enjoy the stories you post!


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